<p>I did my common app essay on the prompt "Describe a place or environment where you are perfectly content. What do you experience there, and why is it meaningful to you?". I would love it if people would read my essay and give me feedback! Thank you so much!</p>
<p>I will if you can PM it to me! :)</p>
<p>I’ll read it!</p>
<p>I can read it too!</p>
<p>Thanks guys! Anyone else want to read it?</p>
<p>I don’t know the specifics of your essay, but I just want to give you some links to help you determine whether you think it fits what colleges are looking for with this particular prompt. I hope your essay currently reflects what colleges are looking for in the essay. But if you think your essays needs a little tweaking, then you can find more suggestions online. I only listed a few here.</p>
<p>[Where</a> Are You Perfectly Content? | Essay Hell](<a href=“http://www.■■■■■■■■■■■■■/2013/05/where-are-you-perfectly-content.html]Where”>http://www.■■■■■■■■■■■■■/2013/05/where-are-you-perfectly-content.html)</p>
<p>[How</a> to Write 2013 Common App Essay Prompt #4: Place or Environment | Applying To College](<a href=“http://applyingtocollege.org/2013/07/05/how-to-write-2013-common-app-essay-prompt-4-place-or-environment/]How”>http://applyingtocollege.org/2013/07/05/how-to-write-2013-common-app-essay-prompt-4-place-or-environment/)</p>
<p>[How</a> To Write Your Essay For Common App Prompts #3, #4 And #5 | Dobler College Consulting](<a href=“http://www.doblercollegeconsulting.com/how-to-write-your-essay-for-common-app-prompts-3-4-and-5/#.UgMuMMu9KK0]How”>http://www.doblercollegeconsulting.com/how-to-write-your-essay-for-common-app-prompts-3-4-and-5/#.UgMuMMu9KK0)</p>
<p>[Perfect</a> College Essay for the Common Application–A Place or Environment | Great College Advice](<a href=“Perfect College Essay for Common App | Great College Advice”>Perfect College Essay for Common App | Great College Advice)</p>
<p>Can I read it too??(:</p>
<p>I’ll read it just PM it to me!</p>
<p>Bump 10char</p>
<p>Ill read it. Just send it to me!</p>
<p>Deljo: i was looking at one of the links that you posted and it was very helpful. I am also writing my college essay using prompt #4 and I feel more confident in it because of this link so thank you.</p>
<p>I’ll read it! PM me!</p>
<p>pm me and ill critique it!</p>
<p>i would like to read it as well.</p>
<p>i am willing to read it :)</p>
<p>I am willing to read it</p>
<p>@emotionprelude for some reason I can’t PM you</p>
<p>I’ll read it 
PM me!</p>
<p>I’ll read it!</p>
<p>I will read it. Pm me</p>