<p>Honestly i think it's pretty bad right now</p>
<p>but can you guys read it for either editing or just help me- I think I could focus the essay more and improve it a lot
also right now my essay falls under category 4 (something that influenced you) for common app but i think it could fall under category 5 (diversity question) if I change it a little</p>
<p>any help is appreciated! ill PM you the essay if you wanna read</p>
<p>i'll read it nd critique it</p>
<p>pm meeeeeeee</p>
<p>bump bump bump...,thanks again noghi</p>
<p>pm me... i will read it</p>
<p>ii will do it too</p>
<p>thanks guys anyone else??</p>
<p>im very glad to read it</p>
<p>PM it to me.
or email me at: <a href="mailto:srrinath@gmail.com">srrinath@gmail.com</a><a href="hint:%20i'm%20at%20my%20email%20more%20often">/email</a></p>
<p>not an 09-er.</p>
<p>I'll can read it
09'er, IB</p>