<p>Title says all...
It's the very first draft, I think it's pretty lame and isn't cohesive, but idk...
Still working on shortening it by 100 words, as it is at around 640 right now.
Its about my chronic disease that I was diagnosed with in 7th grade.
Please and thank you so much for any advice and feedback!!</p>
<p>I’ll read it if you pm it</p>
<p>Thank you! I PMed it to you! Anyone else willing to read?</p>
<p>i can read it.</p>
<p>I’ll send it over wildworld. Thanks! Any others please?</p>
<p>I’ll have a look at it.</p>
<p>I would be happy to take a look. I have a B.A. from Stanford and a J.D. from Harvard. Since joining CC, I have provided essay comments on 78 drafts for 38 students. If you would like to get started, PM me!
JP</p>
<p>@PUL1994: I sent it over PM</p>
<p>@essaywise: Thank you for taking a look! I just gave you a PM. I’m glad to know that someone with your credentials will be looking at the essay!</p>
<p>I’ll take a look at it. :)</p>
<p>If you still need help, pm it to me :)</p>