Please Read my CommonApp Essay (Second Edit)?

College Essays
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<p>Hi :)
Post if you would be so willing to read and comment on the quality of my current 2nd draft of my commonapp essay!
Thanks!</p>

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<p>I’ll read it, PM it over and I’ll get back to you asap :)</p>

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<p>PM me I’ll read it and get back to you on it.</p>

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<p>You can pm to me and I’ll reply with my critiques and comments.</p>

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<p>pm it to me and i’ll help you (:</p>

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<p>Thanks guys~ I PMed the essay to all of you!
-Levinel</p>

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<p>I can help if you still need some advice :)</p>

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<p>BUMP…still haven’t gotten a response from any of these posters… would anyone be willing to read this essay and respond back with advice/feedback/comments?
Thanks!</p>

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<p>Hey, send it over and i’ll try to reply asap! :)</p>

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<p>PM meeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee</p>

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<p>pm me the essay. can you read mine?</p>

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<p>Personal message me I will honestly</p>

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<p>PM i’ll read it.</p>