PLEASE read my commonapp essay!!!

<p>Is anyone willing to read my essay? I'm afraid it's too unstructured...or too confusing...or too simple. </p>

<p>It's about a person who had a great influence on me and I'm not sure that I have enough of the influence part.</p>

<p>So if anyone would be so nice and read it and also give some feedback, I would really appreciate it :)</p>

<p>(I'm an international so there could be some grammar mistakes)</p>

<p>PM it to me and I'll take a look. :)</p>

<p>Toss it over via PM =)</p>

<p>Thank you!!! :)</p>

<p>Anyone else, please?</p>

<p>i'm an 08er, i'll be willing to offer critique if you want me to, pm it to me</p>

<p>Thanks :)</p>

<p>Anyone else?</p>

<p>bump(10char)</p>

<p>i'll read it</p>

<p>I'll give it a try. just PM over...</p>

<p>pm or email: <a href="mailto:srrinath@gmail.com">srrinath@gmail.com</a><a href="not%20an%2009-er">/email</a></p>