please read my commonapp essay!

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<p>who wants to read it? it's about coming to terms with beauty--racial, artistic, societal, etc--in a narrative format. i applied to yale (deferred) and am looking for some critiques. please, by all means, be harsh. let me know if you want to have at it! i prefer college students, 2014 admitted students, parents, or any adults. thanks a lot!</p>