Please read my essay. I need it to be perfect.

College Essays
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<p>Well as close to perfect as possible.</p>

<p>Does anyone wanna read my common app essay?</p>

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<p>Make it perfectly REFLECT YOU. I’ll read it soooo send it ova’.</p>

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<p>im game, especially if you’ll read mine :)</p>

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<p>hi I just read your post and got curious</p>

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<p>I’ll read it and give you feedback, can do the same for me, please? </p>

<p>^^PM on CC.</p>

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<p>sure, I’d love to!</p>

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<p>PM me, i’ll help</p>

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<p>Yes, I’d like to read your essay. I’m very critical, I think, but also very thorough. I’m a grammar buff, teacher, and former copywriter. Best to send me your prompt and your schools. Then, email it to <a href="mailto:four.years@yahoo.com">four.years@yahoo.com</a></p>

<p>That way, I can send back colorful changes, which I can’t do here.</p>

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<p>^ incredibly shady lol. kind of like a stranger trying to usher a child in their car by offering immense amounts of candy…</p>

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<p>^
haha
lmao</p>

<p>but yeah ill read it over if u want</p>

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<p>I tried to send my essay to everyone who requested it but I don’t know if it sent. Can anyone tell me if they got my essay?</p>

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<p>PM me, I’ll give you my two cents.</p>

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<p>i’ll give it a read</p>

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<p>I’ll read it. I have a strict passion for sentence diagramming and just how to structure essays. PM me.</p>

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<p>I’ll read…</p>

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<p>I’ll read it if you want. I promise to give you feedback.:)</p>

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<p>very nice essay btw lol, just make it more about you. i think i told you this but just in case.</p>

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<p>If you still need volunteers to critique your essay, pm it to me.</p>

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<p>pm me if you still need help.</p>