<p>Hi all!
I am in the process of writing an essay of which I am actually extremely proud. I really hadn't been able to come up with a solid idea for about a month, and it just hit me today and I've written about 200 words in an hour and a half. If anybody would be willing to critique my essay and offer some more ideas, it would be really helpful!!</p>
<p>I’ll help you out!</p>
<p>I can read it.</p>
<p>PM it to me; I’m a great proofreader. It may take a little while because I’m looking at a lot right now but I promise you a good scrutinization.</p>
<p>PM me please! :)</p>
<p>I can proofread it if you want. Just PM me!</p>
<p>Don’t proofread at this point. Right now you want to be sure you are getting your thoughts out. Then you want to rewrite and shape it. Then you want to go over every sentence and eliminate extraneous words and make the sentences flow better. Then you proofread.</p>
<p>If you’d like, I can proofread it as well.</p>
<p>If you want, PM me</p>
<p>I can help you, PM me (:</p>