Please Read My Essay

Hi,

I wrote my Common App essay, and I was wondering if anyone would be willing to read it and give me some feedback. I’m looking for readers who are at least 20 years of age. I think the rule on here is that I’ll PM you my essay.

n.b. At one point, my name is mentioned, but for privacy reasons, I inserted a pseudonym.

Thank you so much!

I’d love to read it

I’d be interested in reading it.
Also please give me an idea of what types of colleges you are applying to so I can get a gist of where you’re headed.