Please read my Extracurricular Short Essay?

<p>I've completed my first draft of the CommonApp evaluation of a significant extracurricular!
Looking for some readers who could give some feedback :)</p>

<p>Thanks, let me know!</p>

<p>If you’d still like some help, PM it over! :)</p>

<p>BUMP…still need some readers for this essay :&lt;/p>

<p>i can try to help :)</p>

<p>I’ll read it!</p>

<p>I’ll read it</p>

<p>I’ll gladly give it a read. pm it!</p>

<p>I’ll read it and i’ll surely give you some advice/tweek it alittle if you want.</p>

<p>Sure send it over. Just let me know the topic so I know what I am reading and can better critique you.</p>

<p>I’ll read it.</p>

<p>@Lavy27, NspiredOne, studied4sat, gotmilk, and hoopser77… I’ll send you guys the essay once I get home from school. As to everyone before that, I’ve sent it over to all of you! Thanks</p>

<p>I’d love to give it a look as well.</p>

<p>Okay, I’ve sent it to all of the people on this list. Yet haven’t received a response yet. I’m worried that perhaps something is wrong with the server and I’m not getting the PMs maybe. Has anyone sent a reply to me thus far about the essay? Because I haven’t received anything back. Thanks</p>

<p>I’ll take a crack at it.</p>