<p>Its really unique (atleast i think so) and my rough draft</p>
<p>Please be really harsh </p>
<p>Please help me god</p>
<p>Please actually Pm back with help</p>
<p>i'd love to read and give feedback :)
PM me</p>
<p>Bump? Anyone else? </p>
<p>I just need some help....</p>
<p>Well, I don't mind, but I'm an 09er.</p>
<p>I don't mind. PM me.</p>
<p>I'll read & critique your essay from the viewpoint of an adult college parent.</p>
<p>since no one above has responded >:|</p>
<p>I am looking for some help/guidance</p>
<p>PM me i'll critique it today</p>
<p>i got ur pm
but i haf a question
r u continuing on from the intro para above?</p>
<p>i would be happy to read it</p>
<p>i read ur essay
i actually relli like it:D
good job
i PMed u wit my feedbacks</p>
<p>sure I'll read.</p>
<p>I'll have a look.</p>
<p>ill still read if u need more people. :)</p>
<p>Jeez only 1 response >:(</p>
<p>Is there anyone ekse out there who can actually critique my paper?</p>
<p>I can read it. I will PM you back today, once I get your PM.</p>
<p>Bumpty Dumpty</p>
<p>09'er here but I could read it if you want. pm me</p>
<p>sure, but im an 09er</p>
<p>i can read. but im getting sick of UNIQUE..
unless ur essay could persuade me ;)</p>