<p>Full two pages. I put my essay on the ScoreView thingy from the Collegboard...and I got a 12. I'm skeptical.</p>
<p>What is that? You know your grade already?</p>
<p>I think it's a 10</p>
<p>"Full two pages. I put my essay on the ScoreView thingy from the Collegboard...and I got a 12. I'm skeptical."</p>
<p>You mean the auto essay score thing in the CB online course? It's not very accurate.</p>
<p>Ok, I figured it was inaccurate. I think it is a 10.:) Maybe I'm being too optimistic though. I'm going to write my next essay soon (next practice test), so I'll bbl.</p>
<p>I did another essay. If you'd like, I could PM it to you. Thanks.</p>
<p>I'll be glad to read it and give you feedback.</p>
<p>all right, im a 9th grader and i dont know much about the essay on the sat ( i have taken the old sat 2 times as part of a special program and i got a 1060(7th grade) and an 1160 (8th)</p>
<p>i do consider myself a decent writer though. It seems some of your writing might come off as imature <em>corny</em>. You have some rough transitions as well.
you repeat words <em>everyone</em> which kind of bothers me. Also it is kind of short, i know that you dont have much time but u should try to get a little more in depth - especially in the last one. I feel if you use a personal experience, the analysis has to be much more in depth becuase the sat grader dosnt know tommy, where as he certianly has heard of napolean.
overall i like your ideas but try to explain the relevance a lil more</p>
<p>dont take my comments too seriously....remember im just 15</p>
<p>1) Corny, I said I would've changed.</p>
<p>2) Transitions, I know I need to work on.</p>
<p>3) It isn't that short in my opinion...its two pages FULL My personal experience and conclusion,together, were written in 5 minutes. </p>
<p>Thanks for your comments, I know what I need to work on.</p>