<p>I'm still unsatisfied with them and I'd really appreciate anyone's input. Be harsh! Give me suggestions! I'm applying under Sociology for most, and Anthropology for others, but mostly as an alternate. </p>
<p>I'll PM you! </p>
<p>I know it's last minute and i would really appreciate anyone's help.</p>
<p>You do realize that you’re way too late for this, right? Apps are closed now.</p>
<p>Edit: never mind, you still have another day.</p>
<p>@smltk1505h</p>
<p>I’m pretty sure the OP has already started his/her application, in which case it would not be too late—the deadline was extended to Dec 1st 11:59 PM PST.</p>
<p>Yeah it’s the last day. Any offers?</p>
<p>Send them my way in a private message. I will read them. </p>
<p>I wish I had known they had extended the deadline. My first one is really good but my second one is “meh”. At least it does not have any grammar or spelling mistakes.</p>
<p>I’ll read them.</p>
<p>I’ll read them.</p>
<p>Thanks so much! I really appreciate it. Don’t hesitate to be harsh or blunt!</p>
<p>I’ll read, but remember I’m not an admissions officer so take any suggestion I give with a grain of salt.</p>
<p>Yeah, ill read it. If you can put your stats in a PM so I can tell you if you hold a good shot with the school. If not send the essay via PM and ill try to put my input\revise it as best as i can</p>