PLEASE read my UNC Supplement! Deadline is in 50 minutes please!

<p>Tell us about a time when your curiosity led you someplace you weren’t expecting to go.
“Okay everyone, the school is going to set up a winter camp in Connecticut. Who would like to attend?” This was the question my teacher asked me when I was in the 6th grade. Many of my friends were excited to go, and so was I. “Wait, so we are going to go to a camp in Connecticut for two weeks? That is going to be awesome!” What would it feel like to leave New Jersey without my parents or siblings, or to be on my own for the first time? The curiosity and the thoughts were endless. When my mom and I went out to shop for camping supplies, I was practically running around the store due to my excitement. I just could not wait to go. The morning of my departure arrived. My parents drove me to the school, which is where I met up with my camp advisors and friends. I did the usual: said bye to my parents, and promised them I would behave. Then, I hoped into one of my advisor’s cars with three of my friends. Once the car started moving, my advisor told us that it is going to be a six hour drive. “Oh my God, that’s awesome.” said of my friends; it was awesome. We played with our Gameboys, ate at McDonalds, and listened to music all along the way. But, my friends and I fell asleep. “Get up, get up, we are here”, said my advisor. Once we got up, we were confused. Instead of arriving at a wooden cabin, we were in front of a dorm. “Boys, our camp is to going to be held in this dorm.” Everyone was in complete shock. We were all hoping for a nice wooden cabin in the woods. But, that didn’t happen. However, that wasn’t the end of my worries. It was first time leaving my home for a “long” amount of time. Once I settled in, the homesickness hit me. Right away I wanted to go home to my parents and siblings. But, my home was now six hours away. For the first in my life, I felt trapped. Talked to my mother on the phone for one hour the first night, and cried the second .My curiosity took me somewhere I was not expecting to go. However, my camp advisors and friends were by my side. They were going to my family for the next two weeks. From that experience, I learned if one gets develops a curiosity for something, he/she must look in the mirror and question themselves. He or she must tell themselves that if where I go doesn’t meet my expectations, then I will have to accept it. For me, my curiosity took me to the imaginary world of sadness, somewhere I was not expecting to go.</p>

<p>Hate to say it but I found 3 typo or grammar errors.</p>

<p>No to be mean but you should have started the essay earlier and had someone read it over.</p>