<p>Can someone please look over my Supplemental Essay for Cornell School of Engineering. It's a pretty rough version that I need to finish up soon, and I really need someone to check for basic grammer and also give me some feedback on the content of the essay. </p>
<p>Right now, it's 533 words/500, so if you see a sentence or two I can knock off, that would also be greatly appreciated.</p>
<p>i'll take a look. i'm not great with feedback, but i'm great at spotting grammatical errors. PM it to me.</p>
<p>I'll read it.</p>
<p>Can someone else here read it?, preferably somone who will respond after I send it to them.</p>
<p>I'll read it!</p>
<p>I'm having a very low return on edits to my essay; it's kinda depressing, is my essay so bad that it's beyond commenting on. Can someone PLEASE read it and promise to send back edits/comments/something.</p>
<p>pm me, and I'll give it the old once over</p>
<p>PM it to me, I'll take a look.</p>
<p>PM me I will try to help</p>
<p>i will give comments for you</p>
<p>I will definitely give you comments.</p>
<p>Um... just wanted to know if my edits helped at all :D</p>
<p>i</a> can help</p>
<p>i'll read it</p>
<p>i'll read it</p>
<p>Thanks for offering, but I already submitted it and I did get some feedback from the early posters it just took a while to reach me.</p>