<p>Would anybody please read and offer their opinion on my UNC transfer essay? This is my first draft so it's a bit rough. 250 words was the limit. Thanks.</p>
<p>Sure.</p>
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<p>sure, i'll take a look</p>
<p>thanks again</p>