PLEASE read what I would tell my roommate.

College Essays
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<p>This one is for the Stanford transfer essay. It's about 13 lines... and I have to shorten to about 10 lines. It's quirky too.</p>

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<p>I wanna read something. Never read other's essays before, but I wanna help.</p>

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<p>I'll read it for voice. PM me.</p>

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<p>i'll read it. :]</p>

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<p>if you need helping shortening your essay, I'll read it.</p>

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<p>I'll read it. :)</p>

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<p>i want to!!! but it is okay if you don't trust me</p>

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<p>I read it. Pretty good, but you should leave out the part about night terrors. Also, what's with the explicit mother fantasies? Paging Dr. Freud, lol. </p>

<p>Nice work!</p>

<ul>
<li>J</li>
</ul>

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<p>I read it!</p>

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<p>Hey, submitted my Stanford app as well and I was wondering how others handled this prompt - it left a lot of room for creativity but I'm not sure I used it all too well.
PM if u still have it.</p>

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<p>i'd love to read it..PM me</p>

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<p>I can read and edit it extensively :)</p>