<p>I recently asked all of you to help me by critiquing my first Yale essay, and now I ask all of you again to critique my second. Thank you all very much!</p>
<p>Wow... apparently, I type horribly.</p>
<p>heyy soph in college pm it over if u want - it may take me a couple of days to read it tho.</p>
<p>I'll read it.</p>
<p>i'll read it</p>
<p>If you think my first feedback was useful, then I would be glad to give some more feedback.</p>
<p>ill read, pm me =)</p>