Please review a supplement essay.

Hey guys, I wrote an essay last night (250 words), and I was pretty happy with it last night but since I woke up in the morning I’ve been having some major doubts about it. Could someone please review it and provide some comments as to how I could maybe improve it?

I could read it, PM me

@extratang , done! :slight_smile:

I can do it

PM me with the prompt and which school you are applying to