Please Review My Amherst Essay?

<p>I was wondering if anyone- especially parents, current college students, & other adults- would be willing to read and comment on my Amherst essay.
If you are willing, I will send you the essay via private message with the topic.
Thanks!</p>

<p>Anyone, please?</p>

<p>Yeah sure</p>

<p>I would be willing to give some feedback</p>

<p>I can give some feedback if you want
This is as someone who hasn’t written one before so if you’re willing PM me </p>