Please review my Common App essay (International)

<p>I would really appreciate it if a couple people could take a look at my Common App essay.</p>

<p>Being an international applicant, I want to make sure the format is right. </p>

<p>I would really prefer input from college students, just because I don't want deal with any plagiarism issues. Comment below, and then I'll PM you my essay. Thank you so much!</p>

<p>I’m definitely interested in reading it.</p>

<p>I’ve already submitted my Common App essay, so I hope you can trust me when I stay that I don’t plan on copying your essay.</p>

<p>I’ll read it if you like. Also submitted mine for early action so nothing to worry about.</p>

<p>Id love to help. I’ve submitted all my apps through common app, so you can send it to me.</p>

<p>I can read it. Just submitted my application yesterday. I can definitely help!</p>