<p>^ I agree. In fact, his new essay, IMO, is even worse than his old one.</p>
<p>If you guys believe his essay is that horrendous, why don’t you make more of an effort to help him rather than argue over pointless matters?</p>
<p>^ There’s no point. You gave him solid advice when he posted his first essay and he comes back with an even worse one.</p>
<p>^ That may be so, but he had improvement, which is a sign that CC is helping him. </p>
<p>Anyways, I notice you are new, so Welcome to CC!</p>
<p>He, isn’t new. It’s his second registration. New fish cannot know a lot about me -first
My first essay is 3/6- second
My second essay is 4/6 -third
I don’t need your advices ACTTester- fourth
I consider myself the best student of the year because I have prepared for sat only for 2 month and I improved from TOEFL 55/120 to SAT 1600-1700. That’s it!</p>
<p>^ nomination for the most incoherent and narcissistic post of all time</p>
<p>What’s really funny is he grades other’s essays that are actually coherent and gives them 2/12 and he thinks his essay is 4/6. Hahahahaha you’re gonna super disappointed when you get your writing score.</p>
<p>His first essay is more like a 1… none of the examples are relevant to the prompt and he uses rhetorical expressions readers are allergic to… what they call ‘kindergarten writing’</p>
<p>if my essay is 1, then your essay is zero</p>
<p>^^ Let’s not embarass kindergartners everywhere; I would put it at preschool level.</p>
<p>Unfortunately, Suleyman, I have to agree with the above posters (though not as harshly). Your essay is very short and contains examples that are not really relevant to the prompt. In addition, your grammar makes it very difficult for the reader to understand the point you are trying to make. I understand that you are an international and that you have just learned English. If you keep practicing, you could definitely get a 4/6 on the essay. However, the essays you’ve posted in this thread merit, at most, a score of 2.</p>
<p>wow, ACT, isn’t someone being a condescending and arrogant a$$?</p>
<p>Suleyman, you’ve got a lot of work to do, but bear in mind that colleges do take into account that English is not your first language.</p>
<p>^ If you had seen other threads where Suleyman constantly spread misinformation and graded essays far superior to his as “1,2/12” and “terrible”, you wouldn’t be so quick to judge. He’s just getting what he dishes out. Plus, you’re not really one to talk are you? I’ve seen some of your less than cordial posts.</p>
<p>My “less than cordial posts” said nothing along the lines of:</p>
<p>“Nope, I don’t have time to compete with an ignorant international who doesn’t even know English. Sorry.”
or
“Let’s not embarass kindergartners everywhere; I would put it at preschool level.”</p>
<p>I have been firm and harsh, but never so disrespectful and juvenile.</p>
<p>^ But you still don’t know the full story. If you did, my “disrespectful and juvenile” posts might have seemed more approriate.</p>
<p>^
How do you know full story if you are only “Posts: 17”?
It proofs my conjecture that this is somebody’s second registration.</p>
<p>^no, it doesn’t. post count doesn’t indicate how much he/she reads CC.</p>
<p>ACT: no, that does still not excuse comments like the ones I cited above. Those comments were beyond annoyed. They were obnoxious.</p>
<p>i don’t think that new user which doesn’t know all details will pos such posts. It’s alias-100%</p>
<p>yo this essay is ****… this 95 kid thinks he knows everything -_-</p>
<p>@IBfootballer: And you think I’m the only one being “obnoxious” why? As you can see by the post directly above mine, Suleyman isn’t exactly loved on these boards.</p>
<p>@Suleyman: I couldn’t care less what you believe.</p>