<p>Im practicing my writing sections pretty throughly for the last few days as its my lowest scoring section. This is my first essay I've written so far, and would greatly appreciate someone scoring it and providing feedback</p>
<p>Prompt: what motivates people to change</p>
<p>There always seems to be those who deride the proliferation of change in society, but this desperation to maintain the status quo only harms our human's capacity towards innovation. Within the various "change" movements throughout history, we can clearly attribute hope, determination, and politics as the main contributing factors that motivate people. The women sufferage movement and the storyline from The Hunger Games both exemplify how these factors significantly impact our motivation towards change.</p>
<p>The women sufferage is a keen example of how people's intrensic motivations towards change can be augmented. The patriarchal nature of society in the 1800s serves to highlight the significant setbacks faced by women in the journey towards sufferage. This profound - perhaps even evolutionary in human nature- change would not have been made possible without the determination of female reformers like Elisabeth Cady Stanton and the hope kindled from the abolitionist movement. Had women realized that their movement would be insignificant and useless, they would have given up. Likewise, the movement would have despated rather quickly. The rise of the Sufferage movement was a result of the Abolitionist movement. As slaves were fighting to be free, women took political advantage and used it as an opportunity to bring forth change. A spark is all it takes to bring forth a revolution. The women sufferage movement highlights the societal change from patriarchal to true-equality for all.</p>
<p>The hunger games is a novel by written by Susianne Collins in which people live in an oppressive dystopian nation. The main characters actions in the first (74th hunger games where</p>