I’m a junior and I already wrote a draft of my common app essay for this fall’s admission cycle. I used the first prompt: “Some students have a background…”
Could someone critique my essay, please? I’ll message you the essay. Thanks in advance.
Yeah I can as I have been working as a writer in top research paper writing service it would be easy for me to assess the quality of the essay written by you.
^^ @outlooker You probably know this because you’ve been on here a while… But still, I would be a little wary of this guy, because he just made an account today, just so he could post this same thing on two different pages, in not the best-quality English (I also warned the other person). Maybe he’s just spamming, but you don’t want to risk having your essay plagiarized…
But I’ll read it if you’d like!
@outlooker As a fellow junior, I’d be happy to have a look!
@hscruiser @OnMyWay2013 I’m working on some improvements to my draft. Can I show it to you guys in a week?
@outlooker Of course, thanks
Sure!
I’d also be willing to help; PM me your essay when you’re ready!
Which schools are you applying to?
@jjm9876 @OnMyWay2013 @hscruiser I just sent you my essay draft. Thank you so much for agreeing to look at it!
Please read the tips and warnings about essays on the threads pinned to the top of the forum.s
I can look at yours too! Can’t believe you already started yours… Planning on starting and finishing mine over summer.
I am curious to read it @outlooker - I’ll write it over the summer!