PLEASE take a look at my Brown essay...THANKS

College Essays
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<p>Please take a look. I am so desperate. I think this is going to be the crucial factor in my admission</p>

<p>thank you so much</p>

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<p>leave your name so i could PM you. THANKS</p>

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<p>Sure, I'll read it and critique.</p>

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<p>RealM. PM me.</p>

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<p>I can edit it if you still want</p>

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<p>I would be glad to help you.</p>

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<p>I am happy to edit it for you.:)</p>

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<p>PM me! i'd like to read/help</p>

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<p>PM me. Ill take a look at it and comment on it.
fahad89</p>

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<p>ill take a look if you need a really harsh and critical person to correct them.</p>

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<p>PM me the essay.</p>

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<p>I can edit your essay, PM me!</p>

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<p>PM me!!!!!!</p>

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<p>You can PM me if you want. I'll help.</p>

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<p>I can read it too:]</p>

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<p>i'll read it too!</p>

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<p>PM me it, I'm not applying to Brown.</p>

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<p>I will give you some feedback! Just PM me!</p>

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<p>PM me :) i'd love to read it!</p>

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<p>Sounds Interesting! I would like to help!</p>