I am pretty set on the stem field for the rest of my life whether it be computer science or aerospace engineering.
First one is the safe zone, directly about aerospace engineering, but I feel like the ending paragraphs starts to loose connection to the my life experiences and is a bunch of fake positivity BS. Wrote it with a tutor.
Second one is more risky, I talked a lot of trash about my HS performance and mediocrity, but I made something meaningful out of it in the end. It feels more authentic, i wrote it at night without a tutor in less than 1.5 hours
I will reply with essays down below