Please will someone read my essay!?

<p>I have been showing my essays to teachers and family, but I feel like this essay is a little more personal, so I would really like someone that I don't know to read it. Please will someone do me the favor of reading my essay and telling me if it is good or if there is anything I need to change. It is for Fordham University. If you are willing to read my essay, please message me. Its only about 300 words. Thanks</p>

<p>PM it to me, I’ll look it over!</p>