Plz Critique Essay going to Columbia, NYU, Barnard, SMU

<p>Could some of you guys please check out my personal essay?</p>

<p>Thanks so much!</p>

<p>Cate</p>

<p>i'd love to help</p>

<p>i'd love to give you some constructive criticism.. pm me!</p>

<p>Sure. I probably won't be able to get to you until tomorrow, though.</p>

<p>I'll Read Also if you'd like to.. ill have some comments</p>

<p>i'll be glad to help out. i asked so many people to help me, i feel like giving back lol</p>

<p>I am a second year UW-Madison student. E-mail them to <a href="mailto:Swamifez@gmail.com">Swamifez@gmail.com</a> and I'll give you good writing tips.</p>

<p>Sure... okay. :) I'm not applying to any of them.</p>

<p>i'm willing to help. i''ve read for 2 people so far and they seemed pretty happy...</p>