Politically-themed essay, help?

<p>I have just finished the first draft of my common app essay. I'm much more pleased with it than any of my other unsuccessful forays into college essay writing. Would anyone care to offer their two cents?</p>

<p>Sure, I'll read it. Sounds like a touchy subject...</p>

<p>send it over</p>

<p>Anyone else care to take a look?</p>

<p>Sure...Id like to.</p>

<p>i'll take a stab at it. pm it over.</p>