Portfolio/Stats/Chances?

<p>I'm applying to Laguna College of Art and Design's Illustration with Entertainment Emphasis program. Here are the requirements for a portfolio submitted to that program: <a href="http://www.lcad.edu/wp-content/uploads/2013/01/FINE-ARTILLUSTRATION-GUIDELINES.pdf%5B/url%5D"&gt;http://www.lcad.edu/wp-content/uploads/2013/01/FINE-ARTILLUSTRATION-GUIDELINES.pdf&lt;/a&gt;&lt;/p>

<p>I have a 3.0 GPA / 24 on the ACT<br>
Here's the actual portfolio: Portfolio</a> For College - Need Critque
I posted it on a few sites now and I haven't gotten a response, so I'm posting it here.
I'm thinking of cutting out the painted cardinals on the animals slide and adding another development page. To be safe, i'm sticking with twenty images, but condescended like I have it. Or maybe not? What do you guys think?</p>