Possible final draft of common app essay. Read it?

[flyingeagle1994]

<p>PM me please :) I'm willing to read yours as well.</p>

[leoniezzz]

<p>I can help you have a look at it :)</p>

[iiBoGo]

<p>Yeah I’ll trade with you…</p>

[flyingeagle1994]

<p>anyone else? pleaseeee?</p>

[Coolkh]

<p>pm me be glad to read</p>