Since there are so many essays out there that go ungraded, I have decided to grade as much essays as I can to learn more about essay structures and help others improve. (and have them in one place for easier grading) I will be posting my essays too here to be graded by you.
Bad idea, Bethany. The colleges have filters to see whether you’ve gotten your essay online. Posting yours here will make it look as though you’ve plagiarized the essay-- from someone named BethanyD.
PM your essay to anyone who volunteers to read it… and perhaps report your post and ask the mods to delete it?
You press the flag button at the bottom of the post in question. In this case, I’ve gone ahead and deleted. As noted above, you really should only share your essays via PM who offer, and even then, I would suggest only sharing with members that have been here a while and/or have a sufficiently high post count.