Posting a Very out there essay

College Essays
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<p>Keep us updated if she gets her admissions rescinded for plagiarism.</p>

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<p>sounds similar to another essay i read on a differnt site. she copied some of the examples.</p>

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<p>I am all for this kind of essay; hit them with humor. BUT YOU HAVE TO DO IT WELL. This was an awful LIST that showed almost nothing about the writer. Colleges want students who will be something one day, not someone who had a suicidal hamster.</p>

<p>This was pretty much a disgrace and not even an essay.</p>

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<p>I stopped reading after the long list started. I don’t see anything about this essay that qualifies it as “good.”</p>

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<p>Yes, I am interested in this plagiarized Scholastic Art & Writing essay as well. Are you for real (did your friend really plagiarize it) or are you just a ■■■■■? For a thirteen-year-old’s humorous essay, it is okay, but for an eighteen year’s college app essay? Not okay. And worst of all plagiarized.</p>

<p>[The</a> Scholastic Art & Writing Awards](<a href=“http://www.artandwriting.org/gallery/2007/category.htm#HUMOR]The”>http://www.artandwriting.org/gallery/2007/category.htm#HUMOR)
Click on “Pick Me, I’m Fabulous!”</p>

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<p>There is no way that is true.</p>

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<p>^I really hope it isn’t.</p>

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<p>More power to those other 13 yr. olds applying to college.</p>

<p>Could’ve AT LEAST edited that part, damn.</p>

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<p>haha, plagarizer
<a href=“http://www.tommyzor.com/forum/viewtopic.php?f=3&t=104[/url]”>http://www.tommyzor.com/forum/viewtopic.php?f=3&t=104&lt;/a&gt;&lt;/p&gt;

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<p>oh, that would explain the thirteen-year old remark then…</p>

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<p>oh my god…</p>

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<p>I wonder if anybody reported her yet.</p>

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<p>I honestly don’t like it at all. It isn’t giving a picture of her personality other that the fact she is arrogant. It sounds terrible- just a list of random and ridiculous one-sentence events.</p>

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<p>Way to steal an idea! While I know this “super smart” girl is mocking Hugh Gallagher, she seriously couldn’t think of a more original idea? Also, this girl seems to be the most conceited **** I’ve seen on CC.</p>

<p>Anyways, congrats to this girl whom was mistakenly accepted into any college.</p>

<p>Cheers,</p>

<p>supersizeme</p>