Posting my Penn + Chicago Essays for all to see (yes, accepted ED and EA)

College Essays
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<p>haha yeah in truth i dont think i could have gotten into penn RD since there are so many more factors and its just plain harder. also i was going to app ED elsewhere but i realized that i fit in best at penn. i dont think i could have gotten into dart or columbia nonetheless HYP since i just didnt “fit” there</p>

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<p>nobromo, i miss ur old username.</p>

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<p>me too 10char</p>

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<p>brilliant essays, Nobromo…good job and congratulations for getting into Penn and UC</p>

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<p>interesting essays. a great read. thanks!</p>

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Every school but PENN i applied to for laughs. jk you never know who is going to accept you and in my case if i knew i was getting into penn i wouldnt have apped to chicago</p>

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<p>**** dude, these are really good</p>

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<p>i like how this thread has over 1,200 views. lol at u all sending in the same essays :stuck_out_tongue: jk yall wouldnt do that.</p>

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<p>nobromo,</p>

<p>many thanks !!</p>

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<p>You are a profound thinker - it’s visible through your writing. Great job.</p>

<p>TBH, I personally did not like your CommonApp essay (doesn’t matter, you got in anyway :p). I’ve always felt an essay saying “I can’t think of anything” was trite. All of your other essays are absolutely incredible though. I love the professor one too. Your writing really gleams…</p>

<p>Congratulations! Would you mind reading my CommonApp essay? I mean, I’ve already applied and everything… I’m just curious as to what you’d say.</p>

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<p>These essays are EXCELLENT, not only are they interesting and actually about you but you actually know how to write, which is refreshing!</p>

<p>They are all different, and set you apart as a person – they don’t look like everyone else’s essay! THIS is what adcoms want to see :)</p>

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<p>How is 5/0 2 and not infinity? Please explain this concept that my mind is unable to grasp.</p>

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<p>amazing essays, btw :)</p>

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<p>I like how you emphasize on individuality and your style in writing essays are similar to my own.</p>

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<p>your common app essay is amazing. congrats!</p>

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<p>I wish I could write as well as you can. Your essays were simply amazing.
Congrats :]</p>

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<p>a=b
a+b=2a
a+b-2b=2a-2b
a-b=2(a-b)
(a-b)/(a-b)=2
1=2</p>

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<p>but a-b=0</p>

<p>so 0=2(0) which works.</p>

<p>you can’t do division like that when a=b because anything divided by 0 is undefined.</p>

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no but see that is where u are wrong. lol i was just trying to prove in my essays that anyhintg divided by 0 is 2</p>

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<p>oh okay. you were hoping no one realizes that it’s not possible because of the restrictions of division (a can not equal b if the denominator is a-b).</p>