<p>It would be awesome if anyone would be willing to read my "tell us something..." essay for Yale; I would like to know how to improve it, or any other tips for writing it.</p>
<p>I’ll read it! I’m no expert but I will try my best to help you and give you some feedback</p>
<p>Thank you so much 
i’ll pm it to you.
are you applying to yale too?</p>
<p>i’ll read!</p>
<p>I’d be happy to read it too.</p>
<p>I pm’ed it over to you guys
thank you!</p>
<p>I’ll read it. For whatever its worth, I was accepted to Yale so I may have some useful advice.</p>
<p>I’ll read it. God knows i spent ages over mine.</p>
<p>I’ll read it.
Note: I am applying to Yale early but I already finished mine.</p>
<p>I’ll read it!</p>
<p>Sure, I’d love to take a glance.</p>