Princeton and Harvard Supplemental Essay Feedback

<p>Hello, I'm an international student applying to Princeton and Harvard, among others. Would anyone read my Princeton essay? the prompt is "Tell us about a person who has influenced you in a significant way". This is only my first rough draft so I know I have a long way to go. The word limit they want is approx. 500 words but mine is only 373, idk if that's an issue. </p>

<p>Also, can you guys read my Harvard essay? The prompt is:
"FOR STUDENTS APPLYING FROM SCHOOLS OUTSIDE THE US AND CANADA:
What specific plan do you have, if any, for using the education you hope to receive?" and it's exactly 50 words, which is the word limit. </p>

<p>I will be grateful for any help.
Thank you.</p>