Princeton essay critique

Applying to College
1

<p>Anyone? Respond only if you’re willing to give feedback.</p>

2

<p>I'll read it if you trust a kid with less than twenty posts! I've never done one of these before, but you've got to start somewhere, right? No hard feelings if you don't feel comfortable doing it.</p>

3

<p>Christmas break for me. I've got the time.</p>

4

<p>yea send it over</p>

5

<p>I'll read it.</p>

6

<p>i'll read...accepted ED, so lots of free time</p>

7

<p>ill give feedback</p>

8

<p>ill read it</p>

9

<p>ill read it</p>

10

<p>I'll read it, if you trust someone who just started writing posts today</p>

11

<p>sure thing...pm me</p>

12

<p>yupperz ill read</p>

13

<p>send it this way!</p>

14

<p>I'll hit it up and dig it.</p>

15

<p>hit me up with some essay reading</p>

16

<p>I'll read it if you still need some help</p>

<p>(don't worry, I'm done with apps and not applying to princeton)</p>

17

<p>I'll read it if you still need help</p>

18

<p>I'll read it : ) only if you still need help</p>

19

<p>I'll read it. pm me.</p>