Princeton Influential Person Essay?

College Essays
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<p>Can any critique an essay I wrote for Princeton. I'm having big issues with the 300 word limit. It you can, just post and I'll PM you.</p>

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<p>sure....if you can read mine too.</p>

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<p>Sure, I will read it.:)</p>

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<p>i will read it. PM me.</p>

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<p>im writing my essay as well - is it bad if nearly half the essay focuses on that one personw ho has influenced you? i know the essay is supposed to be about you, but it's kind of hard if you don't explain what about that person has influenced you? anyone having difficulties w/ that or is it just me?</p>

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<p>In the spirit of full disclosure, I'm applying to P'ton too, but I'd be happy to look it over if you feel comfortable with it. Either way, good luck!</p>

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<p>ill read it</p>

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<p>I'll take a look at it</p>

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<p>hit me up! i can send you mine if youd like.</p>

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<p>pm it over</p>

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<p>If you still need people to review your essay, feel free to PM it to me. I would gladly send you some constructive critisism -- and hope you are admitted to Princeton :)</p>

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<p>I'll be happy to read it, PM me.</p>

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<p>I just spent 30 mins or so criticizing another essay. I'm still in the mood.</p>

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<p>Sure, I'll look. PM me if you're still interested.</p>

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<p>I will read it!</p>

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<p>i can look at it too..just pm me and i'll be glad to.</p>

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<p>i d like to read</p>

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<p>i'll read yours if you read mine :-))</p>

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<p>hi, sorry im a bit confused, for princeton, do i do both the who influenes me essay plus a quote essay or just one of them? thanks!!</p>

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<p>There isn't a 300 word limit on the other essay. The direction state that the other essay may be 300 words, but does not have to be. 500 words are fine. I'll take a look at the essay if you would like but I suggest fixing the points you know you need to fix.</p>