<p>hey guys, i need help cutting down my essay by about a 100 words... and it could also use some proofreading. </p>
<p>soooo... anyone willing to look over it? : )</p>
<p>I'll take a look! =)</p>
<p>i will read and comment</p>
<p>hey guys, i need help cutting down my essay by about a 100 words... and it could also use some proofreading. </p>
<p>soooo... anyone willing to look over it? : )</p>
<p>I'll take a look! =)</p>
<p>i will read and comment</p>