proof read my cal essay please!!

Colleges and Universities A-Z University of California - Berkeley
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<p>would really appreciate if any1 could read and give critique..</p>

<p>thanks</p>

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<p>I would be glad to. PM if you want.</p>

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<p>send it over...i can help</p>

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<p>I'm a first-year at Cal. I'll look at your essay if you like. Just PM it over.</p>

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<p>Third year L&S here. I'll take a look if you want.</p>