Proofread essay?--Murder should be legal

<p>Now that I have your attention... I'm writing an essay about gaming. I think I'm going to use it for my Jan1 apps, but it's quite rough around the edges. Could any of you take a look and comment? Thanks. Just post or PM me.</p>

<p>hey- i just finished a short answer. I'd love to check yours out if you'll do the same for me. Mine's due the 31st (today) :)
just pm me</p>

<p>ok PM to me</p>

<p>i just wanna read it fine</p>

<p>bobisbob, is that Yale's?</p>

<p>As a gamer myself, I'm actually really interested in what you had to write. I considered writing about this topic but changed my mind shortly after.</p>

<p>Thanks all. I'm trying to make it better.</p>