Proofread my Common App essay #4?

<p>Any of you guys willing to read my common app essay and give me some advice? It would be greatly appreciated!</p>

<p>I’d love to, but I’m just not sure that I’d be that big of a help. I just posted another forum asking for someone to proofread my essay, so I don’t know if you should really rely on me. But if you want to I’d be glad to help you out and proofread it.</p>

<p>@Armorless‌ anyone is welcomed to read it :)</p>

<p>PM me!</p>