<p>dont post if u wont actually give me comments.
thanks!</p>
<p>Can someone proofread mine as well? I could edit someone else's in exchange. I just need a different perspective on this. SOS, I could proofread your essay if you'd like. You don't have to edit mine if you don't want to since you are the one who asked for help first.</p>
<p>ill give you some comments.</p>
<p>ill comment</p>
<p>if you want me to proofread ur essays, then send it to me
PM me</p>
<p>thanks for ur help</p>
<p>pm it over i'll try to help</p>
<p>I'll help you</p>
<p>i'll take a look</p>
<p>pm me..i'll take a look</p>
<p>i'll look at the essays</p>