proofread my UC#1 essay?

College Essays
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<p>I just finished my second draft, and I want to make sure that my content is appropriate and I want some advice and suggestions. Any takers?</p>

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<p>i'll take a look, pm it oveeerrrr.</p>

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<p>Pm 2. Im Willing 2 Read It.</p>

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<p>I'll read it. PM</p>

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<p>PM me.. I'll read it..</p>

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<p>anyone else wanna help?</p>

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<p>sure PM it to me.</p>

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<p>I'll read it. I'm applying to Berkeley though so you don't have to send me it if you don't want to.</p>