<p>I need more criticism, I think I finally have a decent topic and now I just have to edit it up.</p>
<p>Comment if you're willing and I'll PM you my essay!</p>
<p>I will try to give you some advice (34 on ACT reading and english; 4 on AP english)</p>
<p>I’d be happy to read it and give you feedback.</p>
<p>Disclaimer: I’m a senior also applying to the UCs this year, so if you’re not comfortable sending me your essays, it’s fine. Mine are set in stone though anyways.</p>
<p>I sent it!</p>
<p>I’m writing mine right now too. =(</p>
<p>I will read it.</p>