Proofread of my essay

Hi everyone,

may somebody proofread/give me feedback on two of my essays?
One is 250 words, the other one 150.

I could read them! I’m currently a senior though if that’s okay with you

any experienced readers that are willing to help a stressed kiddo out?

please…

I’m currently a hs senior. I wouldn’t mind proofreading for you. Message me.