<p>This is my first post, but can someone proofread my common app essay? I feel like it's alright, but I don't know if it's more powerful if I leave off the last paragraph or not.</p>
<p>PM me. I will read it.</p>
<p>I’ll read it. PM me</p>
<p>Anyone else willing?</p>
<p>pm if you will thanks.</p>