PSAT Writing Help Plz Silverturtle

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<li> Many of whom blacklisted her...</li>
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<p>"whom" can be used because it isn't the subject right? "Many" is the subject in this case?</p>

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<li> The number of people which...</li>
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<h2>Can "which" be used? Technically, "number" is the subject and "people" is not. </h2>

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<li> Some african [plants, while for centuries treating common ailments locally,] are now used in western medicine now.</li>
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<p>Some african [plants used locally for centuries to treat common ailments] are now used in western medicine now.</p>

<p>Some african [,by which common ailments were treated locally for centuries,] are now used in western medicine now.</p>

<h2>Why is the 2nd one correct over 1st and 3rd? o.o</h2>

<p>[Although far more eloquent a speaker,] the incumbent made fewer concrete proposals in his campaign speech than the challenger did in hers.</p>

<p>[Despite him being a far more eloquent speaker] the incumbent made fewer concrete proposals in his campaign speech than the challenger did in hers.</p>

<p>Why first over 2nd?</p>

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<p>“Many” is indeed the subject, but this phrasing could not exist at the beginning of a sentence (you could say, for example, “I didn’t like them, many of whom blacklisted me”).</p>

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<p>If “which” is to modify “people” (which it likely is), we must use “who.”</p>

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<p>The first one is wrong because “while” introduces a dependent clause if one is to use it to mean “although,” whereas we only have a phrase here. I think you have a typo in the third one.</p>

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<p>“being” is a gerund here, which requires a possessive modifier: “his being.”</p>

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<p>Do things like “which” and “who” almost always modify the thingy right before it?</p>

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<p>Most of the time, but I wouldn’t say “almost always.” For example:</p>

<p>The number of people in the world, which is quite large, is bigger than a smaller number.</p>

<p>The number of people who live in the world is smaller than a bigger number.</p>

<p>The “which” in the first sentence could be modifying “world” or “number.”</p>

<p>Ok thanks silverturtle!</p>

<p>Silverturtle, if you’re still there…</p>

<p>I just looked at your profile and there was mention of a self-chancing tool. Do you still have one that I can look at?</p>

<p>I tried PM’ing you but your inbox is full.</p>