q about a part of the common app, and WHO WANTS TO CRITIQUE MY ESSAY

Applying to College
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<p>In the section "extracurricular, personal and volunteer activities" in the common app, there isn't enough room for me to fit everything. </p>

<p>I've created a separate chart in the same format with everything filled in, but the instructions say to complete the section even if i'm attaching a resume. What i'm attaching, however, isn't really a resume, it's just the chart recreated. Does anyone know if i could just attach the chart, or if i should fill in some of the things in the app?</p>

<p>Also, I've just written my application essay. It's #1 on the common app. Would anyone be willing to give me feedback? Thanks!</p>

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<p>I'd add the excess activities under "additional information", that way you don't have to attach anything extra.</p>

<p>And I'll read your essay...pm it to me. :-)</p>

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<p>i'll give some feedback</p>

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<p>I'll read it-pm it to me</p>

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<p>my extra info is just pretty much a recreation of the chart on the common app and with more stuff than the common app gives room for, but you think i should still put it as additional info? does anyone know if it would matter if i did or not?</p>

<p>also...how do i choose which things to put on the actual common app...and what if the honors part of it doesnt fit on the line...</p>