QOTD - Comma Splices

<p>Woody Guthrie wrote and adapted more than a thousand songs, many of them are about the struggles of workers and the poor in the United States.</p>

<p>A. many of them are
B. many of which are
C. many are
D. which are, many of them,
E. and many of them that are</p>

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<p>Choice (B) is correct. It avoids the comma-splice error of the original by using the pronoun “which” in place of the pronoun “them,” thereby turning what was originally an independent clause (“many of them are … United States”) into a relative clause that modifies “songs.”</p>

<p>I got the answer correct because I knew it sounded wrong, but couldn't figure out why. I was wondering how you "writing" experts out there figure out if the sentences is wrong because of a common splice error. I never learned about comma splices in school for some reason. Anyone mind explaining and giving tips on how to spot them on the SATs?</p>

<p>It avoids the comma-splice error of the original by using the pronoun “which” in place of the pronoun “them,” thereby turning what was originally an independent clause (“many of them are … United States”) into a relative clause that modifies “songs.”</p>

<p>so if a sentence has a comma...I should check whether both sides of the common could stand alone as a sentence. if it can, then its incorrect.</p>

<p>is that right?</p>

<p>Yes. (10 char)</p>

<p>A comma splice is when you combine two separate sentences using a comma, instead of using a semicolon or connecting the two sentences in some other way (making the second sentence a dependent clause, etc).</p>

<p>Examples:</p>

<p>I hate the SAT, it's really boring.</p>

<p>This is a comma splice, because on each side of the comma is an independent sentence.</p>

<p>You could fix it in any of the following ways:
I hate the SAT because it's really boring.
I hate the SAT; it's really boring. (this is correct but kind of weird in this case)
I hate the SAT. It's really boring.
The SAT is really boring, which is why I hate it.
etc</p>